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    Default Haiku

    Only the darkness will know
    The truth behind the
    Silence of a broken heart.


    That is all. =D


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    Default Re: Haiku

    Nice me likey

    I used to be able to do haikus but I have kinda lost my skill having not done it in so long

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    Default Re: Haiku

    I will randomly post bits of poems I thought up on my facebook. This haiku was a poetry challenge started by this one dude. I spent a few minutes on it counting, rhyming, and picking the wording. I am satisfied with it.


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    Default Re: Haiku

    Wow that was actually extremely amazing. Its sort of like those sayings you hear old wise people telling the youth.
    If Minecraft had a Japanese intro.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature...&v=H5qFZjuKet4

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    Default Re: Haiku

    Not bad, but the syllables are wrong. It's 5-7-5. Not 7-5-7.

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    Default Re: Haiku

    It's nice but as GameGeeks said, the syllables aren't right. It's like an inverse haiku or something.


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    Default Re: Haiku

    It may not be right in the syllables, but it is a good poem! ^^ keep posting more.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Default Re: Haiku

    I am horribly stupid and coming back to this thread. I was writing this poem down and realized what I had done. I apologize. I would have commented on this sooner, but I didn't have any internet last year. Thank you for the complements though. I think we should revive this thread.


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    Default Re: Haiku

    I am horribly stupid
    No you're not! You just need a few pointers ^.^

    Traditionally, a haiku is more nature-related and written in the present tense to capture a moment in time. "Will know" signifies future knowing.
    Last edited by Princess Cupcake; 03-29-2012 at 11:41 AM.

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