a glimmering light

[polaris 北極星]

i wrote this for my dear friend hiroe chan....


when the sun begins setting inside my heart
youre there to add light amidst the dark
when the tides of sorrow fill my eyes
you are the island in the ocean of my life

when i feel i just want to fly away
youre the reason i choose to stay
when i feel our distance is way too far
i see your brilliance shine bright with the stars

when geography's the thing that i hate the most
the friendship we share always brings you close
when loneliness comes and blinds my eyes
youre the sun that brightens up my skies

when im feeling blue and i cannot cope
youre the one who brings me hope
when i want to leave and move to Rome
youre the reason i come back home

when i feel like im only half a man
you make me feel whole, dear hiroe chan

[OminousCloud]

when i feel i just want to just fly away
youre the reason i choose to stay

You've doubled up on the "just", otherwise it's a very nice and simple poem.

[Kaname Shikara]

Aw ^^ I really like this. It's sweet that Hiroe-chan always helps pick you up.

[polaris 北極星]

thanks! i am very lucky to have such wonderful people in my life

[Kirei Shijin]

This poem is extremely sweet and I enjoyed reading it a lot. Well done! ^^

[SigmaSD]

Wow that was really beautiful. So full of love and adoration, I bet Hiroe-chan loved this. She's one lucky lucky girl.

If only all guys wrote this to their girlfriends.