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    Default Absinthe and Denial

    As a prior note, this was a spur of the moment- inspired work in which I turned into a sound/word rhyming experiment. Whether or not the poem makes sense will be up to the interpretations of the reader. Please try saying it aloud to yourself and tell me what your reactions are, as well as just rating the prose. I'd appreciate all respectful input.

    Absinthe and Denial

    Grant me time to sync a song,
    Rip a rhyme,
    Or keep the calm.

    You'd kill me no further
    Than you'd will me,
    Wilting withering wrought-
    Within a taut tablecloth
    Of sadistic thought

    Though the doubts would pray
    Upon drowning doused dowry days
    Where one or the other
    A sister or a brother-
    A mother or a child,
    A father or a smile

    Would reach into the miles
    Stretching far beyond the rilles
    Which beg for ever sweet and ever lonely...
    Denial.


    Perhaps the world was never meant to make perfect sense.


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    Default Re: Absinthe and Denial

    This writing style is very different (in a good way of course) It had a nice rhythm to it due to the alliteration and rhyming. Your choice of words are also very interesting and give you your own unique voice. ^^ Well done.


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    Default Re: Absinthe and Denial

    The beginning sounds very splendid and I could see a very well written pattern with the words. Your prose was phenomenal if that helps, but I do have to say that it was easier to read it rather than say it cause I got tongue tied.
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