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    Default Ready Steady..

    Slapping pavements
    In shiny shoes
    Causing obstruction
    Disrupting views

    Splashing through puddles
    Enemy sighting
    Eye's like an eagles
    Or a soldier sniping

    Hair slicked back
    Combed and gelled
    Swanky, new suit
    And a strut from hell

    It seems this man
    Owns the block
    From diner 46
    To old Newman's dock

    Clenching a briefcase
    Closed and locked
    A holster undercover
    Firearm-stocked

    A meeting scheduled
    In alleyway 4
    A planned exchange
    The back of the store

    Sunglasses on
    Ready to fight
    This 2 minute job
    Could last all night

    A sudden stop
    A nagging thought
    Just a sold out man?
    Owned and bought?

    Could he change this?
    Doesn't need to stay
    Maybe start over
    And alter his ways..

    What about danger?
    The pace and thrill?
    Adversity calling him
    Slowly uphill

    Until he's 'The Man'
    Feared by all
    He could own a city
    Maybe them all..

    The desire, too much
    The want for power
    Leads him towards
    His final hour

    He thinks he'll win
    Maybe he'll fall
    Or perhaps he'll change
    And shock us all..

    He steps in the alley
    Gun out and ready
    A flurry of shots
    No 'ready steady'

    So did he fire?
    Or flee in a blink
    Is he alive or dead?
    What do you think...

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    Default Re: Ready Steady..

    Again, another WONDERFUL poem. You've always been so good with rhyming and wording. You also always have a way of making your poetry flow beautifully. I like the topics you use in your writing, too.


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    Default Re: Ready Steady..

    O.o that was great! At the end...his foolishness got the better of him is what I think. I could just see some arrogant guy walking around acting like he could take on the world...but he was wrong and got shot up >.< his fault, he chose not to change is also what I think because he was so sure he could win. I know I keep saying this, but I love all of your poems!

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Default Re: Ready Steady..

    Thank you kirei. It makes me smile to know that you like them. I just had an urge to do a story based poem, and this is what happened. Thanks for reading.

    Kirako Shima, thank you very much as well. You guessed the same as me, and the way you saw an arrogant guy, was exactly what I was going for. I'm glad you had fun reading this, and thank you for your comment.

    Cheers guys.
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