Passion... part 2

[Anime-Prince]

Why
Not
Try...
What's the worst that could happen?

Don't
You
Cry...
Are you afraid of them clapping?

Don't
Sit
Back...
Waiting for life to happen

Just
Chill
Out...
And ignite your passion.

Only
One
Life...
It's like they're always rapping

Stars
Shine
Bright
Like they're going out of fashion

So
Stay
True...
And if you're scared of people clashing

Remember
This
Too...
They're just lacking your compassion...

[Kaname Shikara]

Another great one ^^ and nice sequel to the first Passion. Both keep you pulled in, it's like the words are being sung in your head or something and your eyes want to keep on the poem and nothing else.

[Anime-Prince]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked this one.

[polaris 北極星]

it compliments the first one well. it has a bit of a different pace, but you preserved the essence of the overall message. im curious as to what kinda music you are hearing in your head when you wrote this... it def has a definitive beat to the whole thing (it doesnt have an abstract or staggered flow) also, it was a good idea to break the poem up into two parts. i think it had more of an effect on me reading it at two different times... it added to the emotional part of the picture i have in my minds eye when following the story. great work anime-prince!!!

if this were a song, what genre would it be?

[Kirei Shijin]

Hey Anime-Prince! It's been a long time! I'm glad to see you still got it. Nice poem!