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    Default Release

    Every step
    Every move
    Glide and turn
    Feel the groove

    Every breath
    Every beat
    Spin and stop
    Feel the heat

    Step on this dream
    Take on the rhythm
    Another place, another time
    The dance floor is mine

    Escape reality, free your mind
    Just leave everything behind
    Lose control
    Feel the passion in your soul

    Let it take over
    Let it all go
    Unite with music
    Synchronize and flow





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    Default Re: Release

    There's a good beat to this one ^^ nice job Ellxeevs.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Default Re: Release

    I really liked the flow here. The message stands clear. This shows great use of rhythm. Very impressive.
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    Default Re: Release

    i like it! it started off simple and to the point. and then it progressed into more complex and deeper meaning. and then it went back into simplicity. it has a similar structure to that of a dance track (which im very familiar with) this was a bit different from the style of your last poem, which displays the dynamics of your writing style. im definately impressed...great work ellxeeva!!!!
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    Wow, as mentioned earlier it really has a smooth flow. It's wonderful. It really gives people the feeling of wanting to dance to the music. So you thinking of making it into a song?

    To Sigma it could very well be like a 70's grove song.

    My favorite stanza's where the 4th and 5th one. It really gave a sense of freedom along with that escape of reality that you mention in the 5h stanza.
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    I thought the 3rd stanza was a little disjointed the first time I read it. I think "This dance floor is mine" would sound better than "The dance floor is mine" the s and d roll together in a much more fluid way than e and d. I like how it starts off with a b, d rhyming pattern, deviates and then comes back to it. It gives it a nice sweeping effect, whether that was intentional or not, it's a great effect.


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    Default Re: Release

    Wow, this is really good... especially when you put a beat to it. I like your direct use of words. Nice job!

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    Default Re: Release

    This had an amazing flow to it! I definitely enjoyed reading it and I loved the ending. Nice job!


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