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    Angry Passion... part 2

    Why
    Not
    Try...
    What's the worst that could happen?

    Don't
    You
    Cry...
    Are you afraid of them clapping?

    Don't
    Sit
    Back...
    Waiting for life to happen

    Just
    Chill
    Out...
    And ignite your passion.

    Only
    One
    Life...
    It's like they're always rapping

    Stars
    Shine
    Bright
    Like they're going out of fashion

    So
    Stay
    True...
    And if you're scared of people clashing

    Remember
    This
    Too...
    They're just lacking your compassion...
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    Default Re: Passion... part 2

    Another great one ^^ and nice sequel to the first Passion. Both keep you pulled in, it's like the words are being sung in your head or something and your eyes want to keep on the poem and nothing else.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Default Re: Passion... part 2

    Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked this one.
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    Default Re: Passion... part 2

    it compliments the first one well. it has a bit of a different pace, but you preserved the essence of the overall message. im curious as to what kinda music you are hearing in your head when you wrote this... it def has a definitive beat to the whole thing (it doesnt have an abstract or staggered flow) also, it was a good idea to break the poem up into two parts. i think it had more of an effect on me reading it at two different times... it added to the emotional part of the picture i have in my minds eye when following the story. great work anime-prince!!!

    if this were a song, what genre would it be?
    in my head theres a greyhound station, where i send my thoughts to far off destinations.... so they may have a chance of finding a place, thats far more suited than here (ben gibbard)

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    Default Re: Passion... part 2

    Hey Anime-Prince! It's been a long time! I'm glad to see you still got it. Nice poem!


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