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[Ellxeeva]

Something I wrote when I was younger. My 'unsug' - whatever that means. Fixed it a bit. Thanks to Sigma helping me fix some grammar problems. Here goes...



So many questions inside my mind
So many answers yet to find
With this never ending confusion inside me
I’m still wandering to nowhere

Gazing up at the sky
I see nothing but gray
Without my wings I can’t fly
So I knelt down and prayed

Send me someone I can hold on to
Someone I can lean on
Someone who will wipe my tears away

And then you came to me
You held my hand and smiled with glee
He sent me an angel
The greatest one I know

Gazing up at the sky
Now I see the brightest light
With you by my side, now I can fly

Determined to find the answers
No matter how far I should go

I will be fine
Now that you’re with me

[Kaname Shikara]

Aw and you thought this wasn't good? It's deep ^^ I really like it Ellxeevs *Hugs* post more

[SigmaSD]

I like how this poem embodies a sense of faith that eventually leads to a desired outcome. The good thing about it is that you will never know if it was really divine intervention or just how fate was destined to be.

And shows the power of how one person can help guide another through the true path their life should take. Nice job Ellxeevs.

[Anime-Prince]

That... was brilliant. Gave me goosebumps.

[Ellxeeva]

Aww, thanks guys.

[polaris 北極星]

very nice. i like the way it portayed lonliness and helplessness in the beginning, but changed to feelings of hope and complacency. i think music and poetry should be a journey down or through an emotional path...and this is a good examle of that. i look forward to hearing more!

[Ellxeeva]

Aw, thank you so much.