Well of Dreams

**SigmaSD** · 09-18-2010 10:43 PM

A little something Sigma wrote. Hope you guys like it.

EDIT: Stupid pirate day thing ruined my poem. ;_______;
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Well of Dreams

My cherished well of hopes and dreams.
Purified waters; I treasure you so.
Rid my thirst and give me strength.
Be my reason to keep on living.

No one dare to take a sip.
I will defend it with all my might.
It took so much to find these waters.
And I will not surrender them easily.

Yet with all of this protection,
The waters slowly start to change.
My mind begins to get all murky,
The well, it darkens much the same.

These murky waters are still my dreams,
The ones that rid my thirst and hunger.
Stagnant waters, I cherish you so,
Slowly poisoning my ambition.

But you come in and take my hand,
You clear my mind as I revel in light.
Once again I’m filled with hope.
Now I know which course to take.

My cherished well of hopes and dreams.
Once again you’re in pristine state.
Rid my thirst and give me strength.
Let her be the reason to keep on living.

**Anime-Prince** · 09-20-2010 08:46 PM

This is a wishing well of words, Sigma. Very... very... impressive.

**Kaname Shikara** · 09-20-2010 09:52 PM

I know exactly what you conveyed in this Sigma o_o and you made a great poem out of it ^^

**SigmaSD** · 09-20-2010 11:09 PM

@Anime-Prince: Thank you. I'm glad you think it as impressive.

@Kirako Shima: O really? Then what did I convey them? *challenges*

**Kaname Shikara** · 09-20-2010 11:28 PM

Tell you in PM what I think it is o.o

**polaris 北極星** · 09-21-2010 11:40 PM

i like the way the poem steered my feelings. first it was hopeful and bright. then, like the water, the energy of the poem began to get to get murky and stagnant. and just when i was expecting to drown in darkness, hope returned and formed resolve. life is like this, a constant cycle of light and dark, hopes and disappointments, decay and growth, joy and sorrow, etc... its the message i got from this anyway. i definately felt the energy you projected into this poem. great work!