AF's Poem Off!

[Anime Forum]

I'll give Tsuki and .Elmer 24 more hours After that I can't except them.
Okay Kaitou Kid. The topic is snow. Since the first round hasn't ended I'll allow you to make an entry. 24 hours

[Lady_Baneheart_Of_Blades]

Snowy winter night,
ashes strewn across paths of bright,
Unwavering courage of the man,
who stands with a plan.

The men sharpen their swords,
With knives and sharpen cords,
the bard sings his song,
Of meloduis sad and wrong.

The wrongs the men has done,
of the tear in the world and bodies gone,
make a plan for its almost late,
Put out the bate.

The men and women scream,
Seeing a beast of horrors and dreams,
slueth in the night for there is shadows,
of hungry beasts and bows.

The gargoyle of amber and blood,
fights of the last human good,
the snowy icy winter,
ice covers the gargoyle in splinters.

Seased fire and hardened heart,
men have died, but not...

[Anime Forum]

I'll grade these when I come back from Monday Night Raw Live.

[*Tsuki*]

Internet crash. Make Tsuki Sad.

Snow Princess

This is a poem of sorrow; if faint-hearted do not read.
A story of a girl from across the seas.
The place filled with sunshine, smiles and much more.
It held the fairest lady, the princess of the land.

She wandered through the kingdom, seeking something greater.
A place faraway, a prince for herself.
And then one day, she ran away.

Sailed across the ocean, unsure where she was going.
Ended on a land, flat and filled with plains.

The girl stayed in this deserted place, taking shelter in a cave.
But soon snow began to fall, white and glistening.
Yet whenever she touched it, her hand stung from the cold.

Hiding in her cave, she fell into a deep slumber.
Snow piling in front of the exit,
she became shut in.
Waking she found herself trapped-
tried to dig through it all.

Soon she was frostbit and freezing,
the snow falling in around her.

We end our story here,
with a bittersweet fair well.

The princess wanted everything,
in return she got nothing.
But she shall forever be remembered,
as the snow princess from the east.
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Yeah, it sucks. I know.

[Hanamaru Kunikida]

Sorry, I'll have to withdraw if I don't make it. I thought I had the time. So if I don't make it, feel free to take me off the competition. Thanks and sorry once again.

[Artcell]

Hey I'll have to withdraw too,I'm sorry.I've been very busy,didnt have much time to write the poem.Sorry,I'm very sorry.

[Elphaba]

Can I join?
I'm not sure if I'm good at poems but I'd like to try =]
and I'm in school so we'll see how it goes for me
but I wanna join

[Anime Forum]

Since people are withdrawing and I had Monday Night Raw to go too and more events coming up, I'll grade these as soon as possible. Sorry for any inconvienence.

Elphaba you may write one. Topic is snow.

[Elphaba]

One snowfall, One memory

You wake me up one morning
tell me to look outside
I do
I am amazed by what I see
Everything is covered in show
You watch me smile and jump
up and down
I love snow and
You know it
We go out and wander the streets
You watch me so intently
I wonder what you are thinking?
Do you wonder why I love snow?
Why I jump so happily when it happens?
And then you remember...
The night so cold
the sky so dark
snow falling heavily
That's when you found me
You saved me and gave me hope
My gaze meets yours and you read my eyes
this memory of mine I cherish and love
because thanks to you
I am always by your side
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This is one of the first poems I wrote so I hope you like it

[Anime Forum]

Thanks for the entries.. I promise I'll get back to this. I'm having computer issues / school / wwe world tour.

[Anime Forum]

Yea.. thou isn't going to be finishing this. Biggest failure of my AF career maybe? <_<'. Sorry about that.

[SigmaSD]

Yea.. thou isn't going to be finishing this. Biggest failure of my AF career maybe? <_<'. Sorry about that.

That's his way of saying Sigma wins. Whoo!!!