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    Default My not-so-failing poetry-lair

    I've been into writing poems for a few years now. It doesn't beat my feeling for writing stories, but when I feel horrible, it helps writing my feelings down in a poem. I've also won a price a year ago, so I know they aren't so bad.

    I'm used to write in Dutch. But I know most of you guys don't understand that, so I only put my English ones here:

    No-lifer's anthem
    A life seems kinda busy
    Therefore, I'd rather have none
    I prefer lying on my bed
    And wait for my weariness to be gone
    I am a proud no-lifer

    I am still feeling fine
    I'll get a life someday
    But now is not my time


    Exactly my anthem^


    The poem
    I kinda hate my poems

    Especially a poem like this one
    Everyone can read what I was feeling
    And know my problems when I'm done
    I wish I never started writing
    But for that, it's now too late
    I have finished this poem
    Another poem I can hate.


    Just a random poem I came up with


    Waiting
    I often find myself thinking
    How did it become like this?
    Why am I bound to be patient
    while I'm waiting for that kiss?
    The first kiss, which is said
    to be special, like on tv.
    I cannot help it but to wonder,
    Is there such a thing for me?
    Will there really be somebody
    and I really hope there is
    who is able to grant my wishes
    and can give me that first kiss.
    Until then I will be waiting
    I'll be patient al the way
    I'll be waiting, waiting, waiting
    Until you come, that certain day.




    Nameless

    A no is a no,
    I know that but it still hurts.
    It tears my soul apart, but I know
    you're not the only girl on earth.
    Oh, I adore you,
    as much as my love can take.
    But now my dream betrayed me,
    I only want to stay awake.
    I need to forget my feelings,
    even though I know how hard that'll be.
    But I know this dream will never be truth,
    since you have rejected me.



    Wrote this when I got rejected by a girl I used to like x3 Poor me.. I'm over her now.




    A riddle you aren't supposed to figure out.
    Can you see me? No, you can't
    'cause I'm invisible.
    Can you hurt me? No, you can't
    'cause I'm invincible.
    Is there a chance you've seen me coming?
    No, I'm unexpectable.
    And you can't even think about me,
    I'm the unthinkable.
    Are you wondering what I am?
    Even I don't really know.
    The only reason this is written
    is only so I can show
    that there are things that go far
    beyond man's understanding.
    Don't tell me that you discovered what I am,
    I know you're just pretending.


    Riddle-like artsy-fartsy-nonsense XD


    I come up with some more, later
    Last edited by AnythingElseFails; 08-01-2010 at 11:57 AM.

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    Yay! Those made my day!

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    Default Re: My not-so-failing poetry-lair

    Yes, I feel bad.

    Love does not exist anymore,
    it's a word that has lost,
    its meaning, but I want it,
    no matter what it'll cost.

    So many days go by
    without someone to love.
    I guess there's nothing to believe in
    or I'm not superstitious enough.


    Real love has lost it's worth
    Love isn't what it what it used to be
    Many times I've concluded
    There is just nobody for me.


    And another one, straight from my heart:

    I know I am not handsome
    I know I'm not really cool
    I wished someone would cherish me
    At least, not use me like a tool.
    I'm shedding my tears everyday
    slowly they will form a lake
    over which I could build a bridge
    no matter how long that'll take.
    I will build a bridge
    I will name it after you.
    No matter who you are
    Just 'cause you're the one it's leading to.


    I really feel lonely sometimes...
    Last edited by AnythingElseFails; 08-19-2010 at 05:04 PM. Reason: I came up with another poem

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    Default Re: My not-so-failing poetry-lair

    The second one was awesome, you got me crying there *not*
    Anyways, it was great.


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    Default Re: My not-so-failing poetry-lair

    Wow, your poems are amazing. I like your writing style and the way you rhyme. I really liked "Waiting" and "A riddle you're not supposed to figure out."

    I don't know why, but your poems remind me of Shel Silverstein, except a bit more mature.
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