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    Default This Is Me

    Something that came to mind.

    This Is Me

    This is me
    Like it or not
    People should see
    What I sought

    It's not power
    It's not gain
    I'll never cower
    No matter the pain!

    Mind full of ambition
    Vision full of trust
    On a mission
    And win I must!

    Time to start
    Be what I wanna be
    Everything's a part
    Life is not free

    Better work hard
    Don't start to slack
    Let up a guard
    To get my muse back

    The passion is there
    Needs to be awakened
    It's as easy as air
    Work before it's taken

    This is me
    Like it or not
    Now you see
    How I fought
    Last edited by OminousCloud; 12-09-2010 at 01:56 AM. Reason: removed colours

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Default Re: This Is Me

    a poem that says what you stand for and what you protect also it shows how you won't let anything (or any one) corrupt you
    i loved this as i love any other poem!
    good job onee-chan
    Done by me~

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    Now this poem is fantastic. It's a living poem. It has energy and motivation. It's an emotional poem. It inspires. This is one of those poems that are an honour to read. Awesome.
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    Hai Kirako. Been a pretty long time since I read a poem written by you.
    I liked it! Had great flow and showed I was right about you in 2009. Good work!
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    Hey Raiken ^^ I'm glad you liked it. It was January when I first started posting poetry though =o

    Amazing set by
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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirako Shima View Post
    Hey Raiken ^^ I'm glad you liked it. It was January when I first started posting poetry though =o
    Decem.. Jan.. Same thing! Haha. One of these days I need to create a username where no one will know I'm -Raiken-. Peple keep finding out!
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    People will ALWAYS know you're Raiken lol

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    I adore this poem it shows something nobody else can see

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    Thank you for your kind comment ^^

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    It kind of sounds like a rap battle to me. lol. I think its pretty good, flows smoothly, its nice and short, and excellent choice of words. I just have a problem with the last line; it doesn't fit at the end. Maybe you can change it to "How I fought"? I don't know, but its sounds weird leaving it as "It is fought".
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    You're right Sal o.o that does sound better ^^ thanks and I'm glad you like it too.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    That was a very powerful poem...for me.
    I like it very much
    That is actually how i feel sometimes
    Good job and keep it up =3

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    It is speaking right out of my heart ;A; Lovely!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirako Shima View Post
    You're right Sal o.o that does sound better ^^ thanks and I'm glad you like it too.
    Come on Kirako, you shouldn't just take my comment like that. Fight for what you wrote; if you liked it the way you wrote it, then say why you want to keep it that way. Don't just change it because I said it. You have to defend your work.

    I mean, what do I know about poetry? I just write it; I'm no expert. You have to be more assertive at defending what you wrote.
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    That's a good very good and enjoraging poem I wish I could relate. But it's a very good poem and you should wright a bunch more. 10/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by ΣSD View Post
    Come on Kirako, you shouldn't just take my comment like that. Fight for what you wrote; if you liked it the way you wrote it, then say why you want to keep it that way. Don't just change it because I said it. You have to defend your work.

    I mean, what do I know about poetry? I just write it; I'm no expert. You have to be more assertive at defending what you wrote.
    I didn't fight because it really does sound better fixed like that ^^ and you write amazing poems, so don't sell yourself short by even a fraction of a millimeter :/ or I'll hunt you down ^^

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    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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