Don't mind just help me rate my drawing ^.^

[vaner]

just felt bored and draw this drawing, nice or looks bad ?

[vaner]

Anyone please give some comment ty !!

[Desulishor]

certainly alot of stuff in one pic, credit for sheer effort. Expressions look nice enough, and the eyes have nice variety. I wonder how your skills hold up on close-ups though. nicely detailed clothing, especially on the middle. nothing overly bad, everything seems to work int his single pic.

some advice for future artwork: work on non-human objects and sceneries, these are the hardest part, since they require actual drawing skill rather than manga fandom. Also try foreshortening and generally more dynamic poses, characters that are on the move. Since you're already using a pen and a marker pen, u might as well learn to use a blue pen and an inking pen. If i remember correctly, Blue pen does not show up when photocopied and thus can be used freely to define rough lines before actual inking defines the true lines and shading. This and tons of more stuff, loan a book on drawing from the library, nowdays there are even books about manga style drawing.

[vaner]

KK, Thanks for the advice it really help me to improve my drawing , i still have some of mine old drawings but most drawing are manga. Now i am just practicing some of the body parts such as hands , legs and the body .Maybe i will try to draw a drawing that is in running poses.