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    Default Corrections for "Shining Collection"

    I attempted to contact the original transliterator, but s/he never responded, so I'll have to do the corrections here.


    The song in question is this:
    http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/gra...collection.htm


    First, there's a mistake in the kanji lyrics. In the second stanza,
    憂鬱の襤で踊る 自由と嘘に貫かれ
    脆く舞い散るpuzzle この支配から飛び立て
    The 襤 (bo as in 襤褸 boro) should have been 檻 (ori). Maybe that's why the transliterator made a mistake there and put "boro"...


    The rest of the kanji lyrics seems to be correct, so all the corrections I'm making can be directly confirmed by checking the original kanji lyrics. The only other thing is that 破片 (hahen) in this song is irregularly read as "kakera", which still has the same meaning. "hahenra", on the other hand, is NOT a real word.


    The corrections are in bold and underlined:


    Garasu no bedo ni toraware no motion
    Tesaguri de shukujo wa kamikudaku
    Soliday na tail de midara na hane collection
    Himei hodo mujaki na yoru ga hoshii

    Yuuutsu no ori de odoru jiyuu to uso ni tsuranukare
    Moroku maichiru puzzle kono shihai kara tobitate

    Kiss shining hitomi ni kuchizukete
    Toke dasu hanabira mo jama ni naru

    Make me shining irozuku shigeki no hate ni
    Kagayakihajimeta maboroshi


    Shikai wo nukedashita panorama no dimension
    Kanpeki na gitai wa tada furueru
    Cheap na shokushu wa mitsu wo motomeru reaction
    Tsumetakute mo hiwai na kimi ga mitai

    Nanairo ni moteasobu wakidashita kairaku no umi
    Kage ga fuchidoru game kono sekai kara uchinuke

    Kiss shining kodoku wo katachidori
    Karamaru koukai ga kuu wo kiru
    Make me shining chirabaru kokoro no kakera
    Mabushiku sugisaru kibou ni

    Taiki wa somaru akaku nureta yubisaki ni habatakenu chou no namida
    Subete wa suna ni naru shining, make you cry

    Kiss shining hitomi ni kuchizukete
    Toke dasu hanabira mo jama ni naru
    Kill me shining irozuku shigeki no hate ni
    Kagayakihajimeta maboroshi

    Please don't cryin' kodoku wo katachidori
    Karamaru koukai ga kuu wo kiru
    Make me shining chirabaru kokoro no kakera
    Mabushiku sugisaru kibou ni

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    I actually know this song...

    Corrected.

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