Courage..

[Anime-Prince]

Suddenly the boat was sinking
Fire and beast spread
Hands held hands
Courage by a thread

The wind whistled past
And merged with the rain
To help wash the fire
Off this water-bound train

Muscles ached
Stomachs somersaulted
As fear met bravery
That night the boat faltered

But humans are strong
With compassion inside
They called on it now
With the will to survive

They ran to the lifeboats
Like moths to a flame
But instead of blinding
They saw through the pain

Some sailed free
Other weren't so graced
As courage met it's match
And challenged even.. fate.

[Kaname Shikara]

I love your poems! This one flows as well as the others ^^ keep writing for us all to enjoy. ^^

[Anime-Prince]

Thank you very much. Your words are kind

[*Tsuki*]

Oh, wow. That was amazing.
The imagery was really stunning. I can just see people jumping from a burning ship, lowering lifeboats, and struggling to survive as they swim through the waters. Once again, you've proven how great you are. ^^;;

Here's my favorite part:

But humans are strong
With compassion inside
They called on it now
With the will to survive

[Kalila Chan]

Weldone my friend weldone, you are truly a creative poet, keep it up!! I loke to see a lot more from you ^^

[Anime-Prince]

Thank you both very much.

[thcuteness]

I dont typically like poetry but I really liked that poem. ;3 keep up the good work.

[Kalila Chan]

Thank you both very much.

No problem, your poems always amazes me