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    Couldn't think of a good title -_-; lol. Well, here is another poem by me that hasn't surpassed a few of the ones I've been trying to surpass for awhile now, but I'm going to keep trying. This one seems a bit forced -___- I need to quit doing that. I hope everyone likes it. ^^


    Haunting Thoughts and Friends

    All these thoughts inside my head
    Swirling around and darkening my eyes
    Trying to escape this, my heart is dead
    Because they will always show the lies

    The memories of my past
    Leave festering scars on my heart
    But the thoughts of the present
    Make new holes from the start

    The death that lingers in my eyes seems inescapable
    No matter how hard I try
    To hide my true feelings, it'll always be inevitable
    They are unwillingly seen through these eyes

    Present corrections and past mistakes
    None of it matters if you are numb
    Numb to the touch as if you've been frozen in time
    Nothing can bring you back from the cold

    Except the warm touch of a friend
    But if that friend is taken away
    Then I guess you've got to find another way
    All I have to say is:

    True friends stick by you
    True friends will always be there
    They don't get lured away so easily
    They don't turn their back on you

    So, keep your dear friends close and do all you can to keep them
    Last edited by Kaname Shikara; 05-08-2010 at 08:32 PM.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Awwhhhhhhh,
    That was so sweet.
    Well, the end was. <3

    I think this is one of my favorite poems by you, whether you like it or not. xD

    Favorite line - True friends stick by you
    True friends will always be there
    They don't turn get lured away so easily
    They don't turn their back on you <3
    Legit, the best signature by: Kirako Shima <3
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    But it's horrible! O.O I keep re-reading it and I'm like "omg why did I post this?" @.@

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    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    You are you kidding? That was amazing, I like it. =)




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    See?! I agree with @Kairi
    Legit, the best signature by: Kirako Shima <3
    "Maybe if my heart stops beating
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    Thanks >.< lol. I'm glad someone likes it, even though I don't.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Why?Whats wrong there?I love it,awesome work...really...it reminds me stuff tooT.Tyour great.

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    Thanks for your comment ^^ and it's nothing to worry about.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    I see your poems, and you are good, you say you're bad, yet you're not, at the same time I know you can do a lot better. You're only beginning and you're poems are good.

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    This was heartwarming. I loved it!
    Work a little more on the title though. ^^


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