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    What a feeling in my soul Artcell has a reputation beyond repute Artcell has a reputation beyond repute Artcell has a reputation beyond repute Artcell has a reputation beyond repute Artcell has a reputation beyond repute Artcell has a reputation beyond repute Artcell has a reputation beyond repute Artcell has a reputation beyond repute Artcell has a reputation beyond repute Artcell has a reputation beyond repute Artcell has a reputation beyond repute Artcell's Avatar
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    Default A Dying Child

    Not a poem by me.It was written by my very close friend,Zansa.I really like this poem.And since he wouldn't post this,I HAD to!

    A Dying Child
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    Shaking the drawers if my infancy that morning
    I found a smile, a painting with no meaning
    I found my guardians as the authors of my violent acts,
    My parents were the crying of a cruel past
    and my sister is the kindness, shes my heart beating inside my chest under my black shirt, and behind my face
    covered with a mantle of burning rage

    My family is the only thing i hide
    besides my back full of scars
    and my broken faith for an invisible god
    a god that hurts his son, and make him become a boy full of wrath
    something surely went wrong

    Feel the snake strangulating the weak child of my happiness
    blinding the old man of my wisdom
    poor boy,
    captive by some one's freedom
    _______________


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    I really like this poem o.o thanks for posting it sis ^^ and great job Zansa.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    That poem is really good!
    The imagery is very strong as well as the voice
    Your friend is really talented and did a great job
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    Wow,that was awesome!

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    For some reason, I've been feeling overly emotional lately.
    This poem isn't helping. It's so sad. D:
    But well written.
    Very nice.


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