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    Default Untitled.

    I couldn't think of a name for this one. D;
    I wrote it in a few minutes during English today, so if you suddenly die of sucky writing that would be my fault. Oh, and its only three stanzas, of four lines. = twelve lines. Veryshort.

    Untitled.
    The sun beats passionately on the cold ocean,
    Your love is my drug, your fear is my potion
    They say it only gets easier, from here on out;
    but all i can feel is sheer cold doubt

    The sun, clouds, stars, and moon
    will radiate so brightly, but only till' noon
    The ocean sparkles, and glitters, and gleams
    Forever Intently, so it seems

    As things get tougher, my will gets weaker

    Weaker.. Weaker.. Weaker..

    Until that last glimpse of the ocean, takes me back
    back to you, where I belong.
    Last edited by Rulloxp; 05-04-2010 at 05:27 PM. Reason: Color..
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    I liked it Rullo ^^ it's sweet. Great job.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Although I feel differently,
    Thanks.
    That means a lot coming from you.
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    I don't like my work either :| yet others do, so I know where you're coming from ^^ but believe me, it is good.

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    Thanks, i hope so.
    And you SHOULD like your work, becaause its the best I've seen in a long time.
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    wow!Awesome,really great work^^

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    Aww. This is really sweet. I like it!


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    that was really good!
    it flows amazingly and the imagery is beautiful
    good work
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    Thanks you guys;
    I feel like I kindof' forced it though. :P
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