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    We all feel that way, at some point, right?
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Invisible

    You know I'm standing next to you,
    yet you don't even whisper a word.
    Getting tired- about to fall asleep -
    if you don't speak soon.

    I know you're not mute or deaf,
    see you speaking with your friends.
    Talking to that other girl,
    can't wait to go out and play.

    I follow you wherever you go - were you like this yesterday?
    I can't remember.

    I've asked you a million questions,
    all received without an answer.
    You never look this way anymore,
    even though you know this is where I stand.

    Today I followed you home -
    you didn't seem to care.
    Opened and closed the door,
    as if I wasn't even there.

    Yet when you reached your room,
    I watched you fall to the floor.
    Tears streaked your cheeks,
    I asked what was wrong.

    Whispering my name,
    you finally talk to me.
    Just a five word question,
    "Why'd you have to go?"

    Memories of yesterday flood back into my mind.
    Oh yeah, I'm already gone.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoyed.
    *Tsuki*
    Last edited by Tsuki.; 05-08-2010 at 05:04 PM. Reason: Eww. typo


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    Sis I loved this poem and yes we all do feel this way at some point. You are improving so believe in yourself. ^^ I know you like criticism, but I don't know how to give you any because I don't see anything wrong with this poem >.< just keep writing the way you see right and you'll keep exceeding.

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    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirako Shima View Post
    Sis I loved this poem and yes we all do feel this way at some point. You are improving so believe in yourself. ^^ I know you like criticism, but I don't know how to give you any because I don't see anything wrong with this poem >.< just keep writing the way you see right and you'll keep exceeding.
    Gee, thanks sis. ^_^
    It's alright if ya' don't have any criticism, I'm just glad you liked and read it. <3
    Thankies so much. *huggles*


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    Quote Originally Posted by *Tsuki* View Post
    Gee, thanks sis. ^_^
    It's alright if ya' don't have any criticism, I'm just glad you liked and read it. <3
    Thankies so much. *huggles*
    Ok sis ^________^ you're welcome, I really hope to read more soon. *Huggles* yay my sis gave me huggles X3

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    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    I really liked it, and its really true. I actually felt that way not too long ago, but I haven't since then.

    I'd rate it a 9/10, keep it up dear. :]
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    I enjoyed that poem very much!
    You're talented
    .
    [Beautiful signature by Tattster ]
    "Even when our eyes are closed, there's
    a whole world out there that lives
    outside ourselves and our dreams."

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    I liked it as well,
    And yes, i get that way sometimes too.
    Im glad you wrote a poem that has great meaning to it.
    I liked it alot.
    Legit, the best signature by: Kirako Shima <3
    "Maybe if my heart stops beating
    it wont hurt this much
    and never will I have to
    answer again to anyone"

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    Quote Originally Posted by CmPunk View Post
    I really liked it, and its really true. I actually felt that way not too long ago, but I haven't since then.

    I'd rate it a 9/10, keep it up dear. :]
    Youuuuu!
    Raiken! *tackles*
    Glad you liked it.
    I would have cried if you hadn't. Especially since you never reply to my poems anymore.
    Simply . . . change my usertitle. D:
    Kidding, kidding.

    Quote Originally Posted by AVAlution
    I enjoyed that poem very much!
    You're talented
    Thank youuu. <3
    Though not nearly as talented as some people on here. ^.^
    Unfortunately, it seems many people are being inactive. D:

    Quote Originally Posted by Rulloxp
    I liked it as well,
    And yes, i get that way sometimes too. ):
    Im glad you wrote a poem that has great meaning to it.
    I liked it alot.
    Yup. We all feel that way.
    The narrator's was just a little bit different . . .
    Thank you for reading. ^.^
    Glad you liked it so much. Makes me happy for writing it.


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    Quote Originally Posted by *Tsuki* View Post
    Youuuuu!
    Raiken! *tackles*
    Glad you liked it.
    I would have cried if you hadn't. Especially since you never reply to my poems anymore.
    Simply . . . change my usertitle. D:
    Kidding, kidding.
    C.C..C..Change your usertitle? Did you just use those words together in one sentence?

    And sorry about that, I'm not really into poems anymore as much as I used too. I mean I try to write but I can never get anything onto the paper anymore.
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    No, I used the words, "Change my usertitle"
    Not "C.C..C..Change your usertitle?"
    There's a difference!

    Oh, and I know what you mean.
    I've been having a writer's block for the past few months.
    I don't feel connected to my poems I'm writing, at all. D:


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    Quote Originally Posted by *Tsuki* View Post
    No, I used the words, "Change my usertitle"
    Not "C.C..C..Change your usertitle?"
    There's a difference!

    Oh, and I know what you mean.
    I've been having a writer's block for the past few months.
    I don't feel connected to my poems I'm writing, at all. D:
    I think I might call it quits soon with poetry all together. Though tommorow I'll write one and post it onto here.

    Side Note - You had 2,500 reps earlier and now you have 2,499. Haalp I think I'm going insane.
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    Quote Originally Posted by CmPunk View Post
    I think I might call it quits soon with poetry all together. Though tommorow I'll write one and post it onto here.

    Side Note - You had 2,500 reps earlier and now you have 2,499. Haalp I think I'm going insane.
    Don't just drop the usertitle talk XP lol

    Yeah, sis, you did have 2500 o.o; what happened?

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    Quote Originally Posted by CmPunk View Post
    I think I might call it quits soon with poetry all together. Though tommorow I'll write one and post it onto here.

    Side Note - You had 2,500 reps earlier and now you have 2,499. Haalp I think I'm going insane.
    D: Noooo!
    That'll be horrible. ;_;
    I will lurk. <.<

    And yeah, Kirako and Raiken, I did have 2,500.
    But I was bored and stealing is bad. xD


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