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    Default Sensory Symphony.

     
    Cool Liquid hits my face,
    Warm Winds tickle my bare arms.

    Can you feel it?

    Scent of hyacinth overflows in my nose,
    A freshly trimmed lawn overpowers it,
    And with a splash of rain,
    Nature's perfume is made.

    Can't you smell it?

    Sparrows whisper their angelic song to me,
    Accompanied by a doves symphony.

    Can you hear it?

    A drop of heaven's treasure rests on my tongue,
    It trickles down my throat to quench a thirst that
    has only just begun.

    Can't you taste it?

    I spin and fall on the grassy terrain,
    Mom tells me the grass is green,
    Too bad I can't see it.
    I bet it's beautiful
    I can feel it.

    And I know that you can, too.





    This is written in a blind girls point of view in case anyone wasn't clear about that. And when I say "heaven's treasure" I mean the rain.
    Last edited by Kirei Shijin; 04-29-2010 at 01:26 AM.


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    Aw I got what you meant. It's a sad poem because the person in it is constantlty reminded that she can't see but she's happy that she can experience the other senses. It was a good poem sis I really liked it.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
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    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Thanks!


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    Out of all the five senses, the least respected is touch, those who are blind have a great respect for it, they might not be able to see it but they can still respect the beauty of things. I enjoyed it greatly, keep writing my friend.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    Thanks ELR.


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    Quote Originally Posted by ELR View Post
    Out of all the five senses, the least respected is touch, those who are blind have a great respect for it, they might not be able to see it but they can still respect the beauty of things. I enjoyed it greatly, keep writing my friend.
    A life without touch would be horrible! I won't be able to touch the love of my life nor hug my family, something that would truly be hard to live without. Also, I loved the poem! Interesting you linked it to the five senses, haha maybe you should try one with the sixth sense : ).
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    Quote Originally Posted by CmPunk View Post
    A life without touch would be horrible! I won't be able to touch the love of my life nor hug my family, something that would truly be hard to live without. Also, I loved the poem! Interesting you linked it to the five senses, haha maybe you should try one with the sixth sense : ).
    I know! That would devastate me. Honestly, all senses are extremely important. But if there was one I had to live without, it would be smell.

    Thanks for reading my poem and for the feedback.


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    I really liked this poem.
    It got me thinking what it would be like if i didn't have my senses. xD
    Nice way to get your point across,
    Very nice.
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    Thank you, Rullo!


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    Quote Originally Posted by ELR View Post
    Out of all the five senses, the least respected is touch, those who are blind have a great respect for it, they might not be able to see it but they can still respect the beauty of things. I enjoyed it greatly, keep writing my friend.
    Wow. What great auntie said is exactly what I was thinking, only better!
    Great job, Kirei, I reaallly loved this poem.
    The imagery was perfect.


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    Thank you so much, Tsuki!


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    Quote Originally Posted by CmPunk View Post
    A life without touch would be horrible! I won't be able to touch the love of my life nor hug my family, something that would truly be hard to live without. Also, I loved the poem! Interesting you linked it to the five senses, haha maybe you should try one with the sixth sense : ).

    lol, My sister has a hard time touching people when she doesn't take her medication, she bruises when being huged, a nightmare. But I had actually been talking about people who can't feel when being hugged or even know what physical pain was. And it is easy to think of a link if there is a connection to be made. *bow*
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    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
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    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    I really liked it,thanks,i see what you mean...great job!!

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    Thanks! ^^


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