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    Default False Happiness

    This poem came to me. I'm not too proud of it, it's not a very good one of mine, but I was writing my feelings. I hope everyone likes it.


    False Happiness

    Seems like everything is going wrong
    Nothing is working and it's bringing you down
    Though it's not the end, it sure feels that way
    Everyone around you is willing to help

    But-

    You keep everything locked inside
    Put on a smile for all to see
    Make everyone think you're alright
    In order to not bring them down

    Still-

    This pain inside is so real
    The sadness, darkness, and anger
    But no one will know
    Because you never show your feelings

    Heart-

    Your heart is slowly breaking down
    With little holes shot through it
    This false happiness is too much
    Why can't it just be real?

    Fake-

    Everything about you is fake
    Your smile, your laugh
    Even your cheerful actions
    Not many people can tell

    Gaze-

    The gaze in your eyes foretells all
    It shows your pain and agony
    It shows the sting in your heart
    The eyes are one thing that can not lie

    Alone-

    Always wanting to be alone
    It doesn't matter though does it?
    Being alone isn't painful
    It gives time to think

    Think-

    Lay around and mope
    All you do is think
    About what you could have done
    Wishing for the better outcome

    Too late-

    Your chest hurts so bad now
    The pain in your heart is too much to bare
    Break down like a child
    All you can do is cry now

    Cry alone in the same place as your heart becomes cold...

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Nice poem
    I liked it,
    I don't think that its bad since you basically just wrote down your emotions,
    Isn't that what poetry TRUELY is?
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    "Maybe if my heart stops beating
    it wont hurt this much
    and never will I have to
    answer again to anyone"

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