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    Default Never Wander at Night

    Ok, well this poem is a bit weird too. I'm sorry if it's confusing or if it doesn't make sense >.< I wrote it within a few minutes at school today. (I didn't want to do work >_>; ) Everything came to me so I wrote it. I'm sorry if it's choppy or anything. If you have any questions as to what something means...etc...just tell me. I hope everyone likes it. ^^


    Never Wander at Night

    Laying on my back this night
    Watching the moon and stars
    Waiting for you to come back to me
    As I look up, there you are

    I stand up with joy on my face
    But that joy is quickly erased
    As I see your lacerated being before me
    And blood drips to the ground

    You hold a blank expression
    But then your eyes become wet
    You wrap your arms around me
    Embracing me so, but what should I do?

    You try to speak
    But it only comes out murmured breaths
    Panic rising in your eyes
    As someone comes from behind

    I quickly pull you away
    As you let out a stifled cry
    All you do is point and whisper:
    "He did this to me, we have to run"

    He's covered in blood, but not his own
    His face looks nothing but crazed
    As he holds up two blades
    Charging at us with these knifes...

    We have no choice but to run and hide...

    So through the trees we go
    Hoping to escape before we're caught
    Just then a sharp pain in my arm
    Well, so much for that

    I pull out the knife, more blood now
    Then I turn to face him
    There's no use in running away
    He'll keep chasing until we're dead

    So I guess we have to fight...

    I hand you a knife
    As I ready for him too
    "Keep your distance, this wont be easy"
    I say as I charge at him

    Hacking and slashing and skin flying on both sides
    Much more blood is flowing now
    He gets behind me and charges at you
    Oh how dumb I was...how could I let that happen?

    He pierces your heart, you're too scared to put up a fight...

    You fall to the ground
    In a pool of red
    He licks your blood from his fingers
    So much anger...I know what to do

    Missing an arm and having lacerations everywhere
    I can still put up a fight
    As this rage burns on
    He will pay dearly for all this harm

    I kick him in his face
    And shove my knife in his gut
    As he buckles down
    The knife goes through his heart

    As he falls, I see I've won
    So home I go
    Limping as one
    brokenhearted soul

    I can't believe you're gone...
    Last edited by Kaname Shikara; 04-22-2010 at 04:37 PM.

    Amazing set by
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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Even though it has a weird plot, it was really sweet too.
    but, the structure is amazing, and the chill that runs up your spine while reading it.
    I love it Kirako <3
    Last edited by Rulloxp; 04-22-2010 at 08:29 PM.
    Legit, the best signature by: Kirako Shima <3
    "Maybe if my heart stops beating
    it wont hurt this much
    and never will I have to
    answer again to anyone"

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    Thanks Rullo ^^

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    I'm speechless and can see what is happening. Keep writing, my friend.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    Thank you ELR, I'm glad you liked it ^^

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    oooh I love dark poems like this,with story you have realy embedded a thriller story in it, perhaps you can make it into one o_o I'm serious. awsome poem ^^
    "In the end darkness always falls"

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    That means a lot, thank you. ^^

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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