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    Thumbs down My Father and his problems

    This isn't one of my best but here we go. Oh and feedback please.

    I am forever in a heep of tangles.
    A heep of problems that is not mine.
    I am always expected to atain a solution.
    For the problems that do not belong to me,
    Yet always seems to bother me.
    Despite my talents for invisibilty.

    I always wonder why that is so
    But I think I have the answer now.

    I glow like the everburning sun with my kindness to help.
    I sing with my ever so pure notes of trustworthiness.
    I search with my all so innocent eyes for the happiness
    That everyone says is in the world.

    But which I now know is wrong.
    Because those problems that were are not mine
    Became mine when I was murdered
    By the very person who said that there is happiness in the world.

    For he kicked at me!
    I screamed at him!
    He told me she didn't love him,
    I told him there's always hope.
    He told me I musn't lie to him!
    I told him he was the liar!
    He told me to shut up!
    I told him to make me!

    ... and so he did.
    And now I lay dead on the floor of my bedroom.
    Wondering if my mother shall join me soon...

    I dedicate this to all the people who have been abused or have known/know people who is/was being abused.
    STOP ABUSE!
    WH3N D3ATH COM3Z. . .it shall be a r3li3f from the pain OF LIF3
    Tnx whoever changed my usertitle. Love ya

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    You make the point clear, good job. ^^

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Haha. tnx
    WH3N D3ATH COM3Z. . .it shall be a r3li3f from the pain OF LIF3
    Tnx whoever changed my usertitle. Love ya

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    Wow, very good cause, for this poem. I liked it a lot, nice way to add your emotion into a poem you feel strongly about, i praise you (;!

    STOP ABUSE<33!
    Legit, the best signature by: Kirako Shima <3
    "Maybe if my heart stops beating
    it wont hurt this much
    and never will I have to
    answer again to anyone"

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    Tnx. You see I know people who used to be abused and I hate the people that did that to them.
    STOP ABUSE! xP
    WH3N D3ATH COM3Z. . .it shall be a r3li3f from the pain OF LIF3
    Tnx whoever changed my usertitle. Love ya

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    That was really great but also very sad; you did an amazing job though!


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    I once wrote a poem about abuse, it was for a school assignment...never got that poem back though...

    This one is way better than mine was though.
    I'm a psychic amnesiac. I know in advance what I'm going to forget.

    Children in backseats will cause accidents. Accidents in backseats can bear children.

    The more you learn, the more you know, the more you know, and the more you forget. The more you forget, the less you know. So why bother to learn?


    Made by Hakuchuumu

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    @ Kirei. tnx. I don't see abuse any other way though and I normally write sad stuff though if it had been any other it still would've been sad.
    @ Zandan. Haha. I'm sure it was great. What was your mark for it?
    WH3N D3ATH COM3Z. . .it shall be a r3li3f from the pain OF LIF3
    Tnx whoever changed my usertitle. Love ya

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