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    Default Reality or a Nightmare?

    This is very different than my usual work. It also may strike many as a bit weird or odd. If you have any questions as to what something means, ask me and I'll let you know. ^^ I hope everyone likes it.

    Reality or a Nightmare?

    I awake in the dead of night
    Shadows from outside looming in
    Casting an eerie gaze over the room
    Walking to the window, I see a reflection
    A reflection of someone behind me

    A weird sensation on my back

    Feeling startled, I turn around
    What I saw seems to have vanished
    But wait...
    A trail of blood leads out of my room
    Should I follow it?

    Too late...
    Out the door and down the hall
    But, what am I following now?
    The trail has vanished
    Has been wiped clean

    "Maybe I need sleep.
    Yeah that's it, sleep"
    I return to my room
    Only to find the walls drenched
    In this warm, sticky liquid

    Blood...

    With a closer look now
    The walls are pulsating
    Erratic breaths as I marvel at the obscurity
    I turn to the door but what do I find?
    The one from that reflection standing there

    I notice my back is wet...
    It's blood...
    Before, when looking out my window, he stabbed me
    The blood had been mine all along
    But what is all this?

    A heartbeat...
    A slow yet nervous
    Heartbeat...
    Where is that coming from?
    I look to where the man is standing

    An evil smirk aligns his face

    My door has become a heart, but, what?

    Just then he shoves a knife
    Through that flesh that was once the door
    I clutch my chest...
    Coughing up blood as I lie on the ground
    Writhing in pain...

    His smirk is the last sight I see...
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    I really liked it! I likeed the tingly feeling it gives when i read it. (;
    The only part that I can see, is at the end it gets a little confusing.
    Is it that the door became your heart, or your chest?
    Can you explain that to me.?

    Other than that part,
    I loved <3 Keep up the good work Kirako!
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    "Maybe if my heart stops beating
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    Ooo, nice suspenseful-ish story. Seems like a scene out of a horror flick. One of my friends (an amateur filmmaker) might be interested in adapting this into a short film....I wouldn't mind seeing that...
    I'm a psychic amnesiac. I know in advance what I'm going to forget.

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    @Rullo, when the man stabbed the narrator in the back while she was looking out her window is when the man cast a sort of spell on her and her room. Her room became her chest. So the walls became alive and started forming organs that were inside her. If she wouldn't have died from that stab to her heart, her bed would have became her lungs. Lol o.o; weird I know.

    @Zandan, so...was it good? o.o

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    Okay, i get it now. And no, i don't think its odd at all. <--Well, of course. Its weird, but its very creative, and I love it! Your getting better and better, And your imagination is spreading wide. The Sky Is Your Limit <3

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    Wow. This is different, but the good kind!
    Favorite part=
    "With a closer look now
    The walls are pulsating
    Erratic breaths as I marvel at the obscurity
    I turn to the door but what do I find?
    The one from that reflection standing there"



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    Thank you ^^ I thought it was going to be awful >.<

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    That's okay we'll make it through
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    If I want to see it as a short film, then you can be absolutely sure that it was, at the very least, good. At the very most, it was revolutionary, but that's probably exaggerating a bit.

    Let's just take the happy medium and say it was great.
    I'm a psychic amnesiac. I know in advance what I'm going to forget.

    Children in backseats will cause accidents. Accidents in backseats can bear children.

    The more you learn, the more you know, the more you know, and the more you forget. The more you forget, the less you know. So why bother to learn?


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    Lol ok XD thanks. Hm, well you've got me into writing non-rhyming poems lol. Though I'm going to go back and forth with rhyming and non-rhyming. I'm glad to know I can write good ones that don't rhyme.

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    Well, that's good. I'm glad I could do that. ^_^

    Oh, I should ask. Would you mind if your poem got adapted into a short film? Can't make the film without the poet's permission...
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    The more you learn, the more you know, the more you know, and the more you forget. The more you forget, the less you know. So why bother to learn?


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    O.O sure? I wanna see it if you can get it done. It was that good? >.< *Explodes from confusion* Gah O.o

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    Well, I can just see this being something acted out on a screen. My mind is visualizing it and it's coming as vivid as my dreams.
    I'm a psychic amnesiac. I know in advance what I'm going to forget.

    Children in backseats will cause accidents. Accidents in backseats can bear children.

    The more you learn, the more you know, the more you know, and the more you forget. The more you forget, the less you know. So why bother to learn?


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    I guess you could say I have dreams like this too, so I know what you mean.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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