Dove's Flight

[3mO.AnG3L.La3La]

Ok, this poem is incomplete but i thought i should put it up anyway since i knew i was only destined to start the poem. each of you guys can add a piece or ending to the poem and if you do please tell me because i would love to read it. Tnx.

Love is like a dove
Pure white with innocence
Delightful to look at
Serene with elegence to the last feather

But like the dove
Once it gets bored
It takes flight
Leaving everyone else heartbroken with despair

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i love this poem. Bcos i could picture it and understand it. i'm dumb so thats why. But this is a lovely poem. K.I.S.S ^^

[3mO.AnG3L.La3La]

Haha. Tnx and u know that if you say that ur dumb...u'll becum dumb. But if you say that ur clever and work hard u'll be a genius!

[Kaname Shikara]

This was a nice poem. ^^

[Zandan]

Nice, it's short, but I still like it. I was never one for short poetry so you have accomplished something here.

[3mO.AnG3L.La3La]

@ Kirako. tnx shima glad you liked it.
@ Zandan. I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it was so short.
haha this is weird...i don't normally get feedback. and especially from peoples poetry i love so much