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    Ok, this poem is incomplete but i thought i should put it up anyway since i knew i was only destined to start the poem. each of you guys can add a piece or ending to the poem and if you do please tell me because i would love to read it. Tnx.

    Love is like a dove
    Pure white with innocence
    Delightful to look at
    Serene with elegence to the last feather

    But like the dove
    Once it gets bored
    It takes flight
    Leaving everyone else heartbroken with despair
    WH3N D3ATH COM3Z. . .it shall be a r3li3f from the pain OF LIF3
    Tnx whoever changed my usertitle. Love ya

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    i love this poem. Bcos i could picture it and understand it. i'm dumb so thats why. But this is a lovely poem. K.I.S.S ^^

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    Haha. Tnx and u know that if you say that ur dumb...u'll becum dumb. But if you say that ur clever and work hard u'll be a genius!
    WH3N D3ATH COM3Z. . .it shall be a r3li3f from the pain OF LIF3
    Tnx whoever changed my usertitle. Love ya

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    This was a nice poem. ^^

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Nice, it's short, but I still like it. I was never one for short poetry so you have accomplished something here.
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    @ Kirako. tnx shima glad you liked it.
    @ Zandan. I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it was so short.
    haha this is weird...i don't normally get feedback. and especially from peoples poetry i love so much
    WH3N D3ATH COM3Z. . .it shall be a r3li3f from the pain OF LIF3
    Tnx whoever changed my usertitle. Love ya

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