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    Unhappy To Be Continue....

    I am cold and empty,
    the word happiness doesn't exist in my world.
    Suddenly, your face appears in my mind and,
    tears spilled from eyes down my cheek,
    I shut my eyes.
    I bite down my tongue, so I won't yell out the agony within me
    the yearning to vanish from this pathetic and unforgiving world
    darkness surrounds me like a veil covering my eyes
    love does not exist
    it won't ever exist for me
    my soul perished when you left me
    my mind is full of anger and sadness
    a small white light appears in front of my lifeless eyes,
    I can't recognize this warm feeling
    why am I also feeling this piercing pain inside my chest?
    I clutch my chest tight, and I was beginning to feel the moisture of my tears sliding down my cheek,
    I look up at the dark and sad night
    stars start forming and shimmering.
    I stand up and rise
    trying to support my weight with my legs
    mustering all my strength
    the warm light begins to shine brighter, and it takes in the form of a boy.


    Escribiendo todos mis sentimientos - writing out my feelings
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    Was this created with the motive of it being poetry? I was just really confused, with pretty much the whole thing and especially the last line. The last line seems more like you ran out of ideas and popped that in. Is this a poem? Story?..
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    It's a poem..but I wasn't quite finished with it, that's the reason for the last line.


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    That was very creative; even though it seems a bit gloomy, you wrote your feelings, which is good. I just hope you overcome whats bothering you (:
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    It's really great that you wrote out your feelings and it made for an interesting poem. ^^

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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