Fall

[Zandan]

Another pretty depressing one...

Fall

Scars Burn
Flesh Tears
Trying so hard
Only to be overcome by despair

Pills rattle
Death moves
Sweeps me off my feet
Breathless, I yearn

Longing for reprieve
For Darkness to overcome
Dark is wonderful
Dark is light
Death is wonderful
Death is Life

Contradicting thoughts beginning to make sense
The ups outweigh the downs
I think I want this fall
I think I'm begging for my death

There's nothing left;
it's hopeless
And the thing is...
I just can't care anymore

I've lost myself in a sea of emptiness
I'm drowning
I'm Gone
Alone I Break
Alone I Fall

[Kaname Shikara]

This was another good poem o.o nice job.

[Rei]

Great poem! I love the contradicting thoughts.

[Zandan]

Hazah!! People like the poem. ^_^

[Bugsiee]

A really good poem great job:-)