[COLOR=black]Okay, so I've been very interested in Poetry lately and I thought I should give it a shot. This is my first "published" work, and tell me what you think? I worked really hard, so any tips, or advice will be very nice. Thanks, VV [COLOR]
As you walk, the sun gets brighter
Running fast, you feel so lighter
Seeing various places to scowl,
Watching the animals, as they howl
Continuing on past the waves
Looking so anxious, you feel so brave
The sun can burn, only so brightly
Your passion is real, don't take that lightly
Stepping on Stones, you're reminded of before
When your heart was shattered, right from the core
Watching the waves crash and dance, a tear slides down your face
Pouring with emotion, you fall for the trance and suddenly you realize your place
When you do fall in love, the heart becomes pure
And you undoubtedly realize that there is no cure
Cherish the moments you have, and never let them go
Don't fear the unknown, just let your emotions show
Falling in love with them, you whisper, is the easiest part
Letting them go, you finish, can tear you apart
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