My First Attempt at Drawing Ryoko

[Sorbet]

This was my first attempt at drawing Ryoko from Tenchi Muyo.. the proportion is out a little and it's not inked or anything... but sher... first attempt.
Constructive criticism appreciated ^-^


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[UndeadTurkey]

Very good I like it alot....The only thing bothering me is one eye is a little bigger then the other. Keep it up and post more so we can see ^_^

[Sorbet]

Very good I like it alot....The only thing bothering me is one eye is a little bigger then the other. Keep it up and post more so we can see ^_^

Thanks for the reply ^^
Yeah, I was trying to make it look as though her head was turned slightly with the eyes, but it didn't work all that well xD

xoxox

[Kaname Shikara]

This is really good ^^ the only problem I see is the eye like the poster above you said. ^^ Nice work.

[knives1019]

It is a very good drawing please keep drawing and post some more of them.

[Rulloxp]

Wow, ! I like it, the shading and the face looks correctly porpotioned. The only thing i can see that are a little messed up; are the shoulders. They look extremely sharp! Lol, but its a minor error, and im sure you'll improve. For a first try, it was amazing. Good work,

[Mr. Panda]

Wow, ! I like it, the shading and the face looks correctly porpotioned. The only thing i can see that are a little messed up; are the shoulders. They look extremely sharp! Lol, but its a minor error, and im sure you'll improve. For a first try, it was amazing. Good work,

Sharp shoulders? Where do you see sharp shoulders?

[Rulloxp]

Sharp shoulders? Where do you see sharp shoulders?

Well, i guess i don't mean "sharp." I shouldnt' have used that term. What i mean is the shoulder is not porportional to the other; which makes it look "pointy**" to me. Maybe no one else sees it? Sorry, if you misunderstood.

But, i do still think its an AWESOME drawing, and i really like it.

[UndeadTurkey]

Thanks for the reply ^^
Yeah, I was trying to make it look as though her head was turned slightly with the eyes, but it didn't work all that well xD

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Yeah thats what I thought you were going for ^_^....though remember eventhough you may see less of an eye or from a diff angle the eyes should always be proportional....Still like the drawing though none the less ^^

[Brockii]

Very nice work!

I'm also a proud drawer of anime/manga and i'm pretty good at it, almost professional if you could give me that title. But this? This is extremely good!

As mentioned from many of the people who have posted before me, the eye is a little buggered. But hey, very nice once again.

Best regards,
Brockii.

[Tranquiose]

nice work hope to see more. and you know what im gonna say. :P the eye....

[Mr. Panda]

Holy ****ing **** does that suck the big one. I suggest you burn it as soon as possible before your hambeast of a mother walks in and finds your "art" you've been vomiting out onto the back of a ****ing Kleenex every day.

Except her art isn't that bad, when you look at it from a constructive aspect.

Learn to see beyond your ugly nose, troll. A drawing isn't just made of lines.

Perhaps you should pay a visit to your mother who, is in a mental institute, cries out that her daughter is such an ugly troll.

See? I can be a douchebag too. Now gtfo.