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    A poem I've just wrote for my 1000th post here on AF. I hope everyone likes it. ^^

    Deeper

    All the things I'm fighting for, I see not the calamities but the war
    Wondering about the next move to make, hoping everything is a piece of cake
    The actions I take are already in pursuit, always coming out absolute
    As I wonder my emotions late at night, I think back to that malicious sight

    Here I am, standing alone, seeing everything as if made of stone
    I trudge on not wanting to let go, only the closest ones would know
    The thing inside me seems so real, but I know its the only deal
    I gain what I was fighting for, wishing it was no longer more

    The night drags on forever, as the last of your emotions sever
    Leaving you with a weird feeling, that only yourself can do the healing
    The day seems too fast, as you're falling deeper and deeper into your past
    Feeling nothing from all of this, you slowly sink into the abyss

    Deeper now, wondering when you can forget everything that happened in the plow
    When just then you see a wonderful sight, someone standing there in light
    Right beside you where you stand, he holds out an extended hand
    You take it now and feeling lighter than before, mended now, nothing is tore

    All you needed was someone's helping hand
    to pick yourself up off the sand

    Last edited by Kaname Shikara; 02-18-2010 at 08:25 PM.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Woo, cool poem. Sound so fighty and dark, yet somewhat peaceful... and warm... and friendship ~ish...
    Anyway, congrat on 1k post. This is also my goal ^.^
    The post number.. not the poem... I can't ccreate beautiful poem like you.
    Currently on Chapter 11 FFXIII oh.. and FAT PRINCESS is a fun game haha.
    "Hoa đẹp l hoa c gai, gi đẹp l gi ph thai nhiều lần."



    My fav:
    GTO.
    Clannad (and after story of course).
    Toradora.
    Hajime no Ippo

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    Thank you for your comment ^^ I'm happy you liked it.

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    what a beautiful poem for a 1000th post! let us celebrate with slushies at sonic during happy hour! slushies on me!

    i loved the poem. good job

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    nice poem, it calmed me down when I read it


    Trusting a person is giving someone the ability to destroy you, but at the same time being confident the he/she won't.......

    Project Chaos link below.
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    I'm glad you liked it

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Great poem. Consistent rhythm, nice flow, beautiful words and message. It's very deep if i say so myself. Nice one lad. ^^

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    Nice. ^^
    CONGRATS!!!!

    The seven stakes of purgatory! ^^ Good thing to know that they will be the last thing you see before you die. ^^

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    Thanks guys

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Amazing! Simply amazing! Those last few lines were the best; they blew me away. This is your best poem by far Kirako. Be very, very proud of it!


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    Thank you Kirei ^^ I do really like this poem. ^^

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    I also really like how you can compare simple words and make them meaningful. This Poem and "Into the Sands" were my absolute favorites. OH! And "Intertwined" , Their all very nicely written . I love them all (:
    Legit, the best signature by: Kirako Shima <3
    "Maybe if my heart stops beating
    it wont hurt this much
    and never will I have to
    answer again to anyone"

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    Thank youuuu so very much

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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