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    Default Because I Won't Give Up

    Hello, it has been far too long. Soo, I don't consider this to be one of my better poems, but I haven't been feeling creative at all and this is the first poem I've written in what, two months? Well, anyway, it's been too long so here's a poem I wrote this morning. I promise the next one will be much better. This is just starting off anew. ^_^ And of course, I hope you enjoy and thank you for reading.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Because I Won't Give Up

    Step forward and realize your potential,
    don't slack off and do a bad job.
    You have so much going for you,
    why throw it all away?

    Don't need more sad words,
    nor the pity of others.
    I'll straighten my back and open my eyes;
    care to join me on this quest?

    To find the happiness we lost,
    while our hearts were clouded over.
    But I don't plan to give up yet,
    I'll fight on until the end.

    They can say I won't make it;
    I'll see shock when I show them I can.
    Hold my head high and flash a bright smile,
    no need for my hair to be neat.

    Reach your hand up and I'll pull you out,
    of the dark, deep abyss lying below.
    I'll be the teenager who follows her heart,
    without writing poems of sad.

    Huh . . . who knew.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Hope that wasn't too confusing. xD
    Last edited by Tsuki.; 03-26-2010 at 02:11 PM.


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    That's good sis I really liked it.

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Thanks sis, but still not nearly as good as I want it to be. xD
    I'm all rusty.


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    I'm the same way >.< I know how you feel. XD

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Wow, i like it. Very touching; (: Please, keep posting!
    Legit, the best signature by: Kirako Shima <3
    "Maybe if my heart stops beating
    it wont hurt this much
    and never will I have to
    answer again to anyone"

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    ^_^ Why thank you very much. ^_^
    I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'll be sure to post more so please continue to read!


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    SiS that was great lil complex in mid part cause poem is detached still pretty effective good you are still posting poems you haven;t got that much rusty as much as i did.
    ~ai~rox~

    Thanks teed for the site info

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    wow...very nice poem...keep on doing good work
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    @ultra- Blah. I'm being lazy and not quoting. xP
    Thanks bro, good to hear I'm not completely out of it.
    Though I still don't think it's too good so I had better start writing. . .
    a lot.

    @animeangel09: why thank you very much. ^_^


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