The Game

[Sr Machinehead]

This is just something i did in my free-time and figured I'd put up here. any opinions or suggestions would be appreciated.

The Game

You run, you jump, you change to progress.
You think you've moved forward but you've only regressed.
The game itself takes many forms.
But at the end of the day you are always torn.
If you try to win you will always lose.
But if you won't play you'll be old news.
This game of course is the thing called life.
And I'll be condemned if i lose tonight.

[aristyopramana]

I agree with you
life is game...

[Kaname Shikara]

It is true, but also a very good poem o.o I hope you keep writing.