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    Default Insomnia

    Insomnia
    The clock strikes 1am
    And I'm still awake
    My mind is restless
    Racing a mile a minute

    The clock strikes 2am
    And I wander the halls
    Boredom driving my steps
    Up and down the halls

    The clock strikes 3am
    My eyes wander
    Across the bookshelves
    Trying to escape the boredom

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    nice way you have described it.
    just a lil work on your stream.
    ~ai~rox~

    Thanks teed for the site info

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    It's a nice poem over all! Your flow is a little choppy but I hope to see more of your work oh cousin of mine!

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    Nice, it needs to flow a little more but its still very nice! Keep up the good work!

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    Yeah ^^ just work on the flow, otherwise, it's a good poem. You describe it very well.

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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