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    Hmm been a few days since I wrote a poem so I thought I should write one. I hope everyone likes it. ^^ -In advance, I know, it's bad lol-


    Waiting For You


    Always here
    Under the cherry blossom tree
    Waiting for you to come back for me
    To set my heart free

    The tree is getting older as time moves on
    More cracks form at the base and move along

    Always waiting
    For you to come back
    When I'm with you, nothing lacks
    Every moment without you forms another crack

    Through the glass and to the other side
    That is where my heart resides

    Always stuck
    In this same spot, everything seems out of place
    Without you by my side, showing my heart the way
    The glass in getting thicker, shoving every emotion away

    After so long I give up and move on
    I realize all of that waiting was in vain

    There's no way you'll come back for me

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Not exactly, "warm" but i really liked it. It wasn't bad, like you said. It was sweet, and passionate. From what i know about Poetry, its about how you feel; and it seems you spoke how you felt. Good Job, i love it(:
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    I think it was really bad >.< the best stanza's are the 1st and 4th and I thought of those tonight before that thing happened to make me confused and messed up before. So I know that's what interfered with my writing tonight. I'll try to write a better poem tomorrow or the next day though. I'll try to make it really good to make up for this one. Though it might backfire again >_> I just hope not. Thank you for saying it's good. ^^
    Last edited by Kaname Shikara; 03-24-2010 at 08:40 PM.

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    I wasn't just saying it was good! I meant it! But, since i like your poetry, i want you to make more! Rofl<3 you'll bounce back, trust me.
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    Yes I know I will ^^ thank you for your support.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
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    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Don't be so harsh on yourself, Kirako. This is a very good poem! I love cherry blossom trees and the fact that you used it in this poem makes me like this poem even more. Well done!!


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    Thank you sis ^^ I love cherry blossoms too. I was going to make the poem a nice one where she finds him coming for her at the end but I couldn't write it. XD

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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