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    Default The stand off

    Then they came, ready and willing to plunder
    Their armour clashed like heavy metal thunder
    The town went quiet as people stood still
    Blacksmith in his shop, the miller in his mill

    The soldiers crashed into buildings heavy, fast
    Their swords clashed, they were built to last
    The villagers tried to courageously fight back
    But they were outmatched, this was a fact

    What can people do against unaltered hate?
    Can you climb up such a gradient slate?
    Who do you turn to when there's nobody here?
    Sometimes you lose those people to fear..

    The remaining villagers began to flee
    Nothing more here, but viciousness to see
    One guy stood, however hopeless it seemed
    He was fighting for freedom. And peace. His dreams..

    He took his spear and collided with fate
    Fought left and right, disarming such hate
    Sweat ran down his neck, and his skin grew hot
    He didn't listen to his muscles, he just wouldn't stop

    He focused and let instinct show him the way
    Wouldn't let his home burn, wouldn't run away
    Scores of soldiers fell, into the dirt and the grass
    But more kept coming, grains of sand forming glass

    But just when everything seemed to be gone
    A noise rumbled through the village, incredibly strong
    Animals deep from the forest had joined this fight
    This village had called upon natures might

    The tigers, and leopards charged with intent
    To defend the natural, to every extent
    The elephants stormed through, large and proud
    And crushed the metallic industrial soldier-crowd

    The eagles dived and swooped inciting worry
    The animals turned the tables in a flurry
    The guy who stood alone and went toe to toe
    Stood amazed, watching this new allied show

    The animals had watched this human alone
    Saw him fight to defend their home
    So they helped out the weak and repelled the strong
    Nature took up the fight.. to right a wrong

    So when advancement comes
    And threatens our land
    Look who's watching
    They might lend a hand
    Nature looks after those
    Who look after life
    Like this guy
    And the animals
    Who fought that night..
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    Omg wow. This was an amazing story. One of my absolute favorite from you, it has so much meaning. So much to learn. This poem was so....I can't find any words for it! It's left me speechless. Very very well done, 10 out of 10 I'd say. ^^

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Thank you again, Kirako. You always have nice things to say about the poems I post. It makes it feel like they're worth writing. I guess in that sense.. you give my poems meaning. Thank you for that.
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    You deserve every bit of praise for your poems because they truly are that amazing. ^^

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
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    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    This was extremely well written, Anime-Prince! I loved it so much because it was very creative and it's unlike anything I have ever read. It seems like everything you write is so unique. Thank you for writing such a great poem/story. I feel like a more enlightened individual after just reading it once.


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    Thank you very much! Can't believe you liked it that much, it means a lot to me. you've just made me smile- which is a hard thing to do.
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    Well, that's good.


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    Thank you.
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    Default Re: The stand off

    I guess you wrote this during the time when Sigma took long break from AF. Sigma will respond to poem, yes yes? *clears throat*

    Once again, I have to say kudos on your rhyming; you truly deserve the title of poetry prince with rhyming such as this. I guess I liked this one a bit more than your other poetry not only cause of the symbolism, but also because it feels more like a story and the fact that I know this must have taken a while to write. The only thing that was a bit weird for me was the last stanza but the last line does bring it full circle and ends it with a bang.

    I don't know if its just me, but the part where the animals join the fight kind of remind me of the movie "Avatar".

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    Default Re: The stand off

    Brilliant.

    Sigma's right. You deserve the title of Poetry Prince.


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    Default Re: The stand off

    Thank you both, very much. I'm glad you liked it.

    Yeah it does have a bit of an avatar feel.
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