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    she sits, kneels on the cold stone floor of the cathedral
    an old woman, now
    despite her age
    dressed in sombre robes of black
    pale hands clasped as if in prayer,
    yet no longer knowing what she is praying for.

    Mid-morning light sets a glow into the colorful stained glass
    turning the dark world of the cathedral into something else entirely,
    facets of distorted light playing onto her cheeks
    twin streams of dried blood run, frozen under each sealed eye
    which once shone amber with youth -

    once, she had it all.


    she was certainly born a princess to her own rights,
    proudly proclaimed as the most beautiful in her land.
    suitors poured forth
    but she was as conceited as she was beauteous;
    As we all know, my dear friends
    pride pulls blindfolds over even the wisest prophet's eyes,
    the bell to every jester's cap.

    she scorned them, turning every one away
    unkind words dripping like the sweetest poison from coraline lips
    all the time with that sweet mask set upon her face,
    concealing the hideous visage so cleverly concealed underneath.
    her soul delighted in these acts of unkindness;
    she enjoyed seeing suitors turn away in ill-concealed shame,
    their faces crimson.

    even Death came, then, in the form of a young man
    with pale skin, and drawn eyes
    that would make any maiden's heart beat faster;
    hers certainly did.

    in all seriousness, he professed
    fire burning dark in his eyes
    but she brushed him off, laughing
    believing that no-one would ever be good enough for her -
    the laugh of a fool.

    his eyes tightened in rage;

    and soon, her eyes were no more.

    deep hollows of crimson liquid that ran down her face
    flowing anew despite every attempt to clean them away,
    and she, of course could no longer see
    as blind as a baby in its mother's womb
    except she no longer had any protection...

    there, then, she discovered the cruelty of this world
    what it was like to live like a beggar on the streets
    to be accosted by thugs on the street
    what it was like to feel pain -
    to sob herself to sleep on the cobblestones,
    where blood, more than hers, often flowed.
    just that she had been blind to it,
    much blinder than she was now

    it had only been a year, but it felt like she had aged a lifetime.
    she sits here, now, in the shadows,
    praying that no pain will come to her...
    prays to the deaf stone ears of the various saints.
    and then...she senses him

    step by step over the cold stone floor
    a cloaked figure, enormous black wings protruding from its back...

    ...she does not move,
    turning around only when his cold fingers touch her shoulder
    and the blind princess smiles,
    dirt encrusted fingers touching his,
    not afraid anymore
    He has come to claim me...

    Under the hood of the cloak
    a skull smiles, drawing her into his cloak...

    and they are gone.
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    love the poem. beuatifully dark and sad...haha. i enjoyed it, hope to see more. (love the set too)
    WH3N D3ATH COM3Z. . .it shall be a r3li3f from the pain OF LIF3
    Tnx whoever changed my usertitle. Love ya

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    Thanks ^^ I was trying something new, not my style, so it didn't turn out very well...(to me).



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    It is really dark o.o but that's what makes it good I think.

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    I think it turned out great, especially the ending. ^_^

    Mid-morning light sets a glow into the colorful stained glass
    turning the dark world of the cathedral into something else entirely,
    facets of distorted light playing onto her cheeks
    twin streams of dried blood run, frozen under each sealed eye
    which once shone amber with youth -

    once, she had it all.
    That's my favorite part.
    The imagery is amazing.
    Great job. ^.^


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