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    Nightmare In Hell


    The souls that dwell deep in that fire
    You may not believe it but I found myself there
    Peeking inside that hell, everyone peeked back at me with a cold stare
    I held my heart together with bandages and wire

    I am not thinking of escapement
    For my heart feels such a heavy sorrow I can not move
    I don't know if you believe me reader for I have no proof
    But all I had was the memory of a dead friend

    It struck my heart when I walked on these scorching rocks of heat
    My heart slowly cooking till it was well baked
    As I offered this sorrow yet with blood filled heart, it was his to eat

    My pride my love, every emotion I staked
    Like I gambled it away, it disappeared right before my feet
    So here I show my heart before you nicely cooked, and here in sorrow I stand before you defaced

    But what purpose does life, no love have
    And what purpose for my soul, for all had left
    And if I were a thief that would shamelessly steal another's sorrow and heart, would that be a perfect theft
    When I think about it all I wish I could just laugh

    But man does not understand
    The way they row they're boat the way I row mine
    And reader I might have been ignorant for times for many times I ignored and have seen a sign
    These words that I write in the midst of this hell, know that these words are from a soul, that is deeply dent

    Not just a crack love created, No a pain greater then that, stabbing deeper then any knife
    For what I have lost, I can't believe I'm still breathing
    So here I stand at the edge preparing to dive

    When that lava burns and tears through my soul what kind of song will I sing?
    It might be here in my wake that I realize
    That whatever this lethal dive will bring

    Might result in something bad
    But here I jump and the thing I write now, reader you will not believe
    My soul cleansed so purely and like someone took away the bad in my soul, I can't stop but to think he was a great thief
    For he even gave me back the heart I lost, finally I stopped seeing red

    Yet I paid a great price one of unbelievable pain, I cannot remember how the lava felt
    But the scars are visible and an aching pain still remains
    I am hoping it will disappear, hopefully when it rains
    Yet reader there's still a hunger, one I cannot still

    And reader when I got back in this world I looked in a mirror
    For you won't believe that in that very mirror I saw my old self, it was still half alive
    And in the midst of my confusion someone knocked on my old weary door

    And as I opened it, my heart beat fast, scared I would not survive
    And my eyes shut close as my knees again sank to the floor
    I reopened my eyes and saw that old self of mine, it looked sad and it's eyes gave away a sorrow,
    but then it disappeared like an assassin's hidden knife

    Last edited by Kaname Shikara; 03-16-2010 at 03:00 PM.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Great poem. Love the imagery, and the way you using other object to devribe emotion (meh I dun know how to call all these tecnique in English... I am bad at it, fail several classes) anyway my fav. part is "the great thief" Love this poem, a lil depressin tho. Ty for sharing!
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    I love the imagery of it too. ^^

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    O_O

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    That was an amazing poem, it really has a good effect on the reader, like now i'm really feeling hot after all that lava.Great poem!
    I should have seen it in the sky at first, but now i see it in her eyes fireworks.
    All i see is fireworks, every night it's fireworks, all i see is fireworks, taking off like fireworks. - Drake feat Alicia Keys

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