@*Tsuki*: Here is what I have to say about your characters: Ares: I need to re-read what I put for the description of Strains. Strains age like a normal human. Their only detrimental flaw is that most of them tend to be incredibly narcissistic. (Which is spot on on yours. He sounds pretty arrogant.) Also, yes his name is quite fitting, and he fits the role of a Strain well. Fix the age, and I'm sure he'll work. (Great theme song.) Orpheus: I like him. He seems interesting. Accepted. Eurydice: Very good Successor. I'm looking forward to seeing a Successor try to express love.
Oh yeah, I know.
He just has a baby face, you know. xD
He really is 40 but people mistake him for younger.
If that's still wrong, I can change it.
Edit: Took out the one sentence that referred to weakness. =D