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    Default Pride

    Another experiment let me know what you think if you read it please.. =)

    Pride

    To find a cooler place in my life
    To develop a courage like no other
    I lust for happiness like no other

    So here I am on my knees like the undead
    I beg from these swines
    Who told me to endure

    Words are easy to say
    Yet harder to understand
    Though the hardest is to do

    And the pride I swallowed to say what follows
    Took me to long
    Now I realise it's my salvation to say these words

    Please...
    Would you lend me your hand
    To take me out of this place

    To find a cooler a place in my life
    Would you end my endurement
    Would you set me free

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    Default Re: Pride

    I know this is old but as nobody comment it I felt I should do so.
    Like the poem, not very melodious in matters of rhymes or so but it seems like you wrote it with a lot of feeling, which is nice How do long do you write poetry btw?


    "I never think of the future. It comes soon enough."
    "The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
    "Great spirits have often encountered violent opposition from weak minds."
    "Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age eighteen."
    "I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."


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