well, this is my poem too...
i wrote it with an image...
there's one mistake on the spelling, but it's still understandable...
^^
comments and critisisms are alwaYs welcome...
~reika
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well, this is my poem too...
i wrote it with an image...
there's one mistake on the spelling, but it's still understandable...
^^
comments and critisisms are alwaYs welcome...
~reika
Last edited by rEikAbLeU; 03-07-2010 at 08:16 AM.
"When You have eliminated the IMPOSSIBLE, whatever remains, however IMPROBABLE, must be the TRUTH" -Detective Conan
"I'm not ready yet... It's been three years and I still can't greet him" -Hinata Hyuga
Wiching should be wishing..
Also I must say the white rose makes it hard to read the white text. At least that is for me!
Overall it's nice but try to read your poem once more before posting it. I sometimes do this and am amazed at errors I notice.. Sometimes I do not read it and then I see the errors to late haha.
But keep trying and try to get a better picture if you wanna do it in a picture.
"When You have eliminated the IMPOSSIBLE, whatever remains, however IMPROBABLE, must be the TRUTH" -Detective Conan
"I'm not ready yet... It's been three years and I still can't greet him" -Hinata Hyuga
I like it, though the simple rhymes and rhythm make it seem a little bit trite, it's still a nice poem :-) ... Thanks for sharing!
Last edited by Ancient; 03-07-2010 at 08:32 AM.
well, i made this poem around 2am, as you can read down there...
my head's a bit heavy already, but at least i still was able to do it good, though not the best...
i'll do better next time...
^^,
"When You have eliminated the IMPOSSIBLE, whatever remains, however IMPROBABLE, must be the TRUTH" -Detective Conan
"I'm not ready yet... It's been three years and I still can't greet him" -Hinata Hyuga
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