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    Default Can't Sleep Wond'ring why

    well, this is my poem too...

    i wrote it with an image...
    there's one mistake on the spelling, but it's still understandable...
    ^^



    comments and critisisms are alwaYs welcome...

    ~reika
    Last edited by rEikAbLeU; 03-07-2010 at 08:16 AM.
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    Wiching should be wishing..
    Also I must say the white rose makes it hard to read the white text. At least that is for me!

    Overall it's nice but try to read your poem once more before posting it. I sometimes do this and am amazed at errors I notice.. Sometimes I do not read it and then I see the errors to late haha.

    But keep trying and try to get a better picture if you wanna do it in a picture.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Howling Star View Post
    Wiching should be wishing..
    Also I must say the white rose makes it hard to read the white text. At least that is for me!
    i noted on the first part, that there is one mispelled word and you're right, it's "wiching" lol!

    yeah, im not very much with colors, i'll practice next time... thanks!
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    I like it, though the simple rhymes and rhythm make it seem a little bit trite, it's still a nice poem :-) ... Thanks for sharing!
    Last edited by Ancient; 03-07-2010 at 08:32 AM.

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    well, i made this poem around 2am, as you can read down there...

    my head's a bit heavy already, but at least i still was able to do it good, though not the best...

    i'll do better next time...
    ^^,
    "When You have eliminated the IMPOSSIBLE, whatever remains, however IMPROBABLE, must be the TRUTH" -Detective Conan



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