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    Red face Hands of Time

    The hands of time,
    Move in a clockwise motion,
    Giving me the notion
    that I must move forward
    rather than grab the minute
    hand and rewind.

    But it's so much easier,
    To turn back time
    Move back, Sit back, And sulk
    in the devoured hours
    and the memories they held.


    I want my minutes back!
    My hours, my years!
    But seconds you won't even give me back,
    Past, you are so far but near.

    Lend an ear
    And let me tell you
    my thoughts.

    I'll beg
    with all
    I've got

    Just so you can give me what I want.



    I need the old me
    before all the mistakes
    before all the heart breaks
    before I let sin eat my innocence alive

    ...If you don't turn time backward
    I will surely die.



    And, the hands of time,
    Won't even do me a favor,
    Tedious Time is no savior
    For she takes a soul of youth
    Strips away all its truth
    And repays you, by killing you.
    (one millisecond at a time)

    I'll give it one more try:

    "Hands of time
    Won't you be mine?
    Then I'd stop you
    From burdening our lives."
    Last edited by Kirei Shijin; 03-03-2010 at 11:45 PM.


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    Oh wow Kirei you've written a great poem as always. I loved reading it and it was so wonderful. Don't stop posting on AF

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Yer another great poem it is like you were born to do this. I really enjoyed it. I really liked the flow the most btw. *winks at you*
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    Thank you Kirako and Gero!
    I don't know how this is possible, but I wrote this in 10 minutes. xD lol


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    Your poetic soul

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirei22 View Post
    Thank you Kirako and Gero!
    I don't know how this is possible, but I wrote this in 10 minutes. xD lol
    Well if this is your 10 minute work I can't wait to see the ones that take you longer. Keep up the good work. ^^
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    Thanks you two. ^^


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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirei22 View Post
    Thanks you two. ^^
    So what inspired this one it is very unique.
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    Inspiration=

    A user on here actually. It's something about what he said about my poetry and how he said it, that just made an idea for a poem pop into my head.

    I'd like to thank Anime_Prince for that.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirei22 View Post
    Inspiration=

    A user on here actually. It's something about what he said about my poetry and how he said it, that just made an idea for a poem pop into my head.

    I'd like to thank Anime_Prince for that.
    It is always nice to be inspired by others. That has happened to me before though not with this kinda thing.
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    I loved this one had a great flow and very interesting rhyme scheme. Have to say there are a lot of talented poets on this website.
    I need a new signature and I didn't know what to put, so I decided to throw this in.

    Also check out my blog at http://danielkamin.wordpress.com

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    Thank you, Ghost!


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    Nice!! I just got inspired to write more poetry again. You are my inspiration kirei. Thank you for writing because it makes a difference.
    Oh and the poem? Excellent!

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    Awww, thanks Night! I'm so glad to hear that!


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