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    Default A little something I wrote

    A recycled child

    this is what i made me
    money and alcohol leads to ciggarettes
    the taste in my mouth is familiar
    the smell of a recycled childhood is
    strong in my nose.

    ive allways ried to escape my reality
    to just watch quietly
    but the drug of denial sometimes wears of
    and my true self shows like a cinder in the ocean
    i deny my bodys claim, my mind wanders to
    a place i push against the drug but its taking over again

    i sit sometimes for hours just thinking about a life
    i could have had, then the sounds all come rushing back to me
    i dont want to be used again like a second hand toy found again
    id rather just sit here and thinking.

    a cd stuck on skip, my minds never here
    my speech is stuck on a loop, but thats
    all thats left form a recycled child
    Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
    nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.

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    *cries* Wow, your poem is soo beautiful but also very sad. I can't tell you how much i really like your poem and how much it touch me.
    But
    Thank you soo much for sharing it with us.
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