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    Wrote this a while ago, poetry was never a strong suit for me but I thought this one turned out alright.





    On a Restless Night

    On a Restless night the wings of Zephyr could not, would not
    Take me to that land of unimaginable comfort.
    Where honey laden droplets of rest
    Drizzle over toil burdened eyes
    The night echoes the coming morning dew as I lay staring, gazing,
    Into a land I could not reach.


    My only friends chirp softly with the cool night breeze
    Misery with others is misery lessened.
    Dully my head throbs, how it betrays me as my mind disassembles,
    Piece by clockwork piece it falls away.


    Yet that graceful beauty of sleep will not take me.
    Confused my heart wonders what could trouble me so,
    A life not yet fulfilled? A dream lost in the wind?
    And so I turn over, the restless wanderer always.


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    This has a good story to it. Nicely written and you wrote a good poem without rhyming, very good. ^^ you should post a piece from one of your books on AF, I'm sure people will love to read it.

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    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Yeah I think I may post an excerpt, it would probably show more about my writing than a poem(something I rarely write at all). Thanks for the advice!
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