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    Default Dreams.

    This poem probably makes no sense.

    A world of icicles with no demise
    Adventure on slopes with a slip and a slide
    A cosmic beam multicoloured with surprise
    Granting the occupants a place to hide

    A tree of comfort brown in appearance
    A worldwide book with little meaning
    The transformation compels interference
    On a poetic rhyme I find myself leaning

    Because life shows reality when and how at will
    But dreams pull you back to individuality
    Our minds are leaky cups, hard to fill
    Refreshing our urge to play defines vitality

    Give me a swing or a boat setting sail
    The pictures in our house show what could be
    A dream takes away the fear to fail
    Releases the desire to courageously be free

    Bobbing alone our imaginative world
    Searching for adventure and new found wonder
    Treasure hunters, no, just a boy and a girl
    Sky high swoops and sea diving under

    So we escape to our stories and rhymes
    And focus on fun like we used to
    Climbing volcanoes and swinging through vines
    At the top of the mountain will be me and you..
    Fascinated by the rain, influenced by the wind. Adventure for fun.

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    I think you did a good job on it. It rhymed well and there is an interesting story to it. ^^

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Thank you very much. Your too kind to me!
    Fascinated by the rain, influenced by the wind. Adventure for fun.

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    Hy there, i really liked your poem, it has that sense of wonder the whole way through it, and thats what dreams do , they leave you wondering and in a daze, or urging for an adventure. Awsome poem!

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