I Feel your pain

[BlackRebellion]

My sister, I know your pain.
I feel it just like you,
The uncertainty, The fear,
the feeling of a lost love,
That has comeback in your life,
but only as a friend.

I feel your pain,
The questions you wanted answer for so long,
the feeling we both tried to cut away from.

I feel your pain tonight,
I look at his face and thought of what could have been,
but that is all I'll ever know now.

I feel your pain my sister and I know you feel mine.

[Kaname Shikara]

It was a good poem but the stanzas are everywhere ^^ it might need to be like that for a meaning but either way it doesn't matter because it's a good poem keep up the writing. ^^

[Bugsiee]

I like your poem, it shows just how deep a sisters love can go, It's sweet and meaningful, i like it, keep it up!