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    Default Ions of Lose - One Piece

    A/N: I hope everyone will like this poem that I made, it’s about the Straw Hat crew separation. There is something else that is interesting. Ion definition: An atom or a group of atoms that has acquired a net electric charge by gaining or losing one or more electrons. That sounds kind of like the crew, doesn't it. They found each other, because of loses. Now because of a negative they lost each other. That may not have made sense, but essentially this is about them and how several words could describe what happened to them.

    ~ I hope you all enjoy. I do not own One Piece.
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    Ions of Lose

    Opposition,
    Inhuman strength,
    Strength to defeat us,
    We knew this.

    Confusion,
    We looked,
    Looked around hard,
    But no sign of our one Nakama.

    Realization,
    It dawned,
    Dawned on us,
    Like a ton of bricks.

    Affliction,
    Cruel pain,
    Pain of denial,
    That we were losing each other.

    Hyperventilation,
    The hysteria,
    Hysteria in our eyes,
    It hung around for too long.

    Determination,
    Was still there,
    There in all of us,
    But it was dwindling.

    Immobilization,
    The light,
    Light in us,
    It just disappeared.

    Separation,
    It happened,
    Happened to us,
    Because…

    we lost.
    Last edited by Razzmatazz; 02-19-2010 at 04:29 AM. Reason: I forgot to fix "Nakama".
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    wow thats a wonderful poem. I loved it keep on writing okay .


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    Quote Originally Posted by lunarangel View Post
    wow thats a wonderful poem. I loved it keep on writing okay .
    Thank you for the incouragement! I am glad you enjoyed it! And don't worry I will. I am coming up with a few new Nami pairing stories. One is EnelxNami and the other is LuccixNami.
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    Nice poem Absolute beauty hold of pure magic in it command was totally flawless .
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    Wow this is a nice poem. ^^ You did a great job on it.

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    ultra_maniac: Thank you for all the big compliments!

    Kirako Shima: I am glad you think I did a great job!
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