The white rose

[Strawberry_girl345]

The white rose

In the storm
Stands the white rose
tumultuous waves
of destruction abound her

Yet tall is the white rose
strong in the face
Of the sensed doom around her
And she does not bow down

Pure is the white rose
In the compost earth
growing eternal strength
in the nights that so hurt

I see not the white rose
She is so far away
But I long to protect her
But only the words

[Bugsiee]

Hy strawberry girl, i really like your poem, don't say your not gud i think your great. It has alot of meaning i like that.
Hy you joined in feb, me to!
Hope to here from you again! :-)

[Strawberry_girl345]

Thank you bugsiee, i like your poems too. I hope to here from you again too, btw PM me if you wanna be my friend n.n

[_-Midnight-_]

Nice poem, It kind of switches from thinking the white rose is you, to the white rose being someone else at the end. Plus you misspelt Cigarettes in your signature unless its suposed to be like that.

[Strawberry_girl345]

thank you. And it's meant to be like that.

[Kaname Shikara]

Nice poem

[lunarangel]

That poem was beautiful,keep on writing,mwah . .

[ultra_maniac]

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BAYBEEHHH I COMPARE YOU TO A KISS FROM A ROSE ON THE GREY! >_<
Ahem...it was a magically beautiful poem ichigo. I loved it. 8/10 for me.
Hey i think this poem actually inspired me to write my other poem subconsciously. OoooOhh...

[Kirei Shijin]

This was a lovely poem. I really like poems that have to do with flowers.

[Strawberry_girl345]

Thank you guys ^-^