True Darkness

[Lotha Cryso]

True Darkness
SLowly drifting into nothingnes,
Feeling the claws scraping against your legs,
Seeing the darkness that already took your life,
Hear the screaming of pain,
Tasting the blood that crawls down your scalp,
Smell the sulfur that is eating away at your life,
Small little stories that stab you over and over again.
In taking what is far too much,
Slicing away from your own flesh and blood,
Watching it kill what is left of your humanity.
What is left to do?
Where can you hide now?
No more hiding,
No more games,
Fear what is coming,
Fear all the flames,
Crawl to the shelter,
Hide away the shame,
But he comes in the darkness
Eating away your ways.
Over and over
Knowing what will happen,
Feeling before it has happened,
Drowning in your own punishment,
Sawing away as you're going insane.
He watches your speech,
He follows your past,
He knows what is true and what is a lie,
He has your punishment written down,
He wants to eat away your soul,
Just know that true darkness isn't your home.
Your sight ripped out,
Your voice sliced apart,
Your skin burned off,
Your nose full of water,
Your ears dripped with acid,
Punishments for those who don't follow the law.

[ELR]

I'm at a lost for words, and truth be told, I'm a little shrunken into my seat. But do you really believe darkness is only this small amount of things? If so then I do hope you find some type of light. This is the first poem I've seen of yours on here, it is good, do keep writing, my friend.

[Kaname Shikara]

It is a good poem. Very very detailed and gory. I hope you're not feeling like this as well. Keep writing. ^^

[BlackRebellion]

Tis is a very dark poem! seems like something I would write! ^_^ well in my earlier years. I liked it it was detailed and it does seem like you to feel this way! and yes keep it up ^_^ even if its gory it is good.